Plagiarism (took a widely mocked poem and made it into a haiku)
Flecked being; layers.
A serrated carapace.
Scars of abrasion.
awesome, i love the idea of doing cut-up haikus like this. i made one too but as a tanka:
too little noticed
the abyss which separates
called the filling in
heightens the sublimity
of the dead from the living
>>3mqzkwyh5dk2g
I've been debating doing some Tankas but I feel like I'd have to stitch multiple haikus together. My ideas usually come 1 - 2 lines at a time.
（⌒∇⌒ゞ）
Gentle kiss, loving.
Embrace; never requited.
Weep. Ungiven gift.
滴りや
橘の汁
くそ暑い
腹痛み
明日のノルマ
怖すぎる
spilled water on floor
wet water got on my socks
my socks are wet now
Each year I wonder,
have I changed with the seasons?
Indecisiveness.
起きている
誰のちんぽか
顔の上
>>3mqzim5e46s2g
you make me happy
water tastes so fucking good
i feel scared rn
kiwen uta mi
li kama ante tawa
kiwen uta sin
Everything in reach;
grasped by my hand, with time.
Yet missing one part.
ᐃᑎᕕᒻᒧᑦ
ᑲᑕᒋᐊᖅᑐᖓ
ᑑᓪᓕᑎᑐᑦ
Itivimmut
Katagiaqtunga
Tuullititut
World’s underside
For falling’s sake I go there
Yellow-billed loon-like
>>3mrf5kmgiac2c
first attempt at writing something in inuktitut. think the haiku is moraically kosher as long as you squint a little and agree to count the super-heavy CVVC syllable at the start of the third line as just a normally heavy CVC one.
I'm really happy there are several languages in this thread. Makes me want to study Japanese harder.
Que nos ciels rougeoient!
Qu'importe notre amertume?
Nous affairons seuls.
tanka:
No one’s born naked
and in fertile Novembers
the placental ice
clothes deep-dreaming toads snugly,
all snoring calm compulsion.
>>3mrjroqqjk22c
裸でも
あんたの体
見えないか
今日寒いけど
海に行かない？
If each person met,
is a world unto themselves;
only one must die
lemon face again!
another laptop DJ
punishing her friends
seattle finds her
eating pretty leftovers
"eye for curation"
Hate that you can't love,
the parts I could never have;
cohabitation
it grows every day
speaking her name, thanatos
burgeoning desire
The face of dead years,
scenic as the countryside
hoarding its rivers.
>>3mu3w2ih4pk2h
fuck that's good
赤蜻蛉
バギーに吸われ
こんにちは
tried a tanka:
My red letter day.
It is cutting my arm off,
my red letter day,
and it is brushing my tears,
it is scrubbing porcelain.
>>3mu5kiz5obt2h
thank you :]
incense powder falls
the warm glow of fading blue
a genuine smile
undying anger
life choking upon itself
to burn everyone
Last days of Summer—
look upon its mighty works,
its white, toothless smiles.
The old world has died
A new one turns upon us
We must kill it too
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